tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2891694310936224097.post6510307735540658674..comments2023-05-11T07:24:06.341-04:00Comments on J. S. Bailey Writes: Night of the Living AdverbJ. S. Baileyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01905434045617670439noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2891694310936224097.post-16913815869773986622012-06-11T18:20:48.921-04:002012-06-11T18:20:48.921-04:00I'm glad I was able to keep you entertained! :...I'm glad I was able to keep you entertained! :)J. S. Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01905434045617670439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2891694310936224097.post-90810850664522809272012-06-11T14:13:46.718-04:002012-06-11T14:13:46.718-04:00Adverbs have a defined time and place and I'm ...Adverbs have a defined time and place and I'm a stickler for not using them to define an action, such as in your first example. You can't say anything coldly. You can have an icy tone, a cold edge to your voice, etc. Just the inner editor in me coming out I guess. Like you said, the second sentence rings much more real. I chuckled all the way through the lead in example by the way, well done!Jenn Flynn-Shonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08441834864191292424noreply@blogger.com